First Poetry Class  

Posted by Francesca Mesiti

Like a bunch of other people have said in their posts, this is my first poetry class I've ever taken  as well. I have always been interested in poetry because I think its a very beautiful form of writing.  In middle school my English teacher encouraged us to be creative, and one of my poems ended up being published! However,  in high school my teachers never made it a point to examine poetry, so I am really excited to learn all about it.

My favorite part of being in this class, even though it has only been three weeks is watching my writing evolve. As I look back on my first muse write it was very weak and made little sense, and now I am starting to use some fundamental elements of poetry in work, such as iambic pentameter, and meter.  I have already started attempting to revise my poems for our portfolio project. One of the poems I have revised is below.




You say your days are limited but I do not listen,

You cannot leave this world without me,

The doctors say your days are numbered,

However I refuse to believe this bad news,

As I stare at the pain on your face my head hurts.



Minutes hours and days pass,

You do not get better you remain ill,

I think about your current state each night as I pray,

I never want you to leave please forever stay,

I look back on my time with you and you have transformed me into a new person,

You proved to me people still could be true.



You kiss me one last time,

Whispering I’ll always be with you,

As I glare into your eyes,

The blue color of them becomes forever embedded in my mind.



Your eyes close and I scream for the doctor,

She tells me she hates to the bearer of the bad news but your gone,

I promise myself I will help find a cure for cancer,

I dream of the day we meet again.

I thank God for blessing me with you,

You were an angel,

I will never let you go,

Never.

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1 comments

I really enjoyed reading this poem. The words were beautiful and I can honestly feel the emotion in your writing. Also, I liked the sound of your writing. I would of gave you exact lines, but this comment brought me to a new page. Good work, it was really a great poem.

February 20, 2012 at 9:54 PM

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